All Comments on 'Julie's Just Desserts'

Story description implies a "cock-tease", I'd say your heroine is anything but a cock-tease. See, she actually has sex with the guys of her choice - she doesn't tease and run away laughing. The title implies that the reader will at least on some level be able to say "Hey, she deserved it," or "Haha! Poetic Justice!" or some such. When this story reached the noncon parts I just felt sorry for her! Julie seemed like a nice gal, (the way you described her), refreshingly promiscous and nice. I really don't see the "Just Desert" angle in this story.

Can't wait for 'Julie -- The Prison Bitch'.....when can we expect it

Julie certainly drained a lot of male aggression in THAT little village. She probably stopped a drunken murder or two. They should have given her a medal.

What a cocksucker! WHEW! She's welcome here ANYTIME.

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given the same treatment that AMerican Citizens are given in Mexico or now in border towns on the US side.

Run-on sentences, fragments, terrible writing.