All Comments on 'Julie's Mistake Ch. 20'

by GrantLee

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Another great chapter

Another great chapter. Can't wait for the next one!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
BRAVISSIMO !

Hats off to you Grant-Lee. Another scorching chapter. Thanks for the early x-mas present.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Thank you

AHhhhhhhhh much awaited chapter and full the usual enjoyment. Thank you and Merry christmas, please keep them cuming. I hope you have plans for young laura to be humiliated and used

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
GREAT!! BUT MORE VARIATIONS DUDE

GREAT STUFF DUDE. I'VE BEEN FOLOWING THE SERIES JUST RECENTLTY I SAY THE STORIES R SOO FANTASTIC!!!

MY ONLY COMPLAIN IS ITS NOT GRAPHIC ENUFF (THE SEX) AND THE POSITIONS R ALL THE SAME- BJs, CUNT-SUCKING, EJACKULATES, ETC.....NO VARIETY (TITFUCKIN WOULD BE NICE).

ASIDE THAT ITS ALL GOOD SO FAR

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Welcome Back

Welcome back Julie - just in time for Christmas - I know it seems ungrateful, but can't wait for the next episode!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Worth printing out to read in bed

Another fantastic chapter to this great series. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
more, more, more

Question for you, though...Are ANY of the girls on anything to keep from getting pregnant? Just a thought as to HOW to humiliate one of them. But keep em cumming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Hhhmmmm

It seems that something is left unfinished...

Hall made the rule that Julie isn’t allowed to wear underwear whenever he’s around. Simply delicious!

Now that Jackson is proposing that he’s gonna have her fucked silly by judges, and clients it seems appropriate that he’d have his own rules for her.

Just using his control to embarrass and humiliate her.

You’d mentioned previously that she’s very conservative, and professional so it would be appropriate if, for example he made her throw all her panties and only wear thongs (which she absolutely hates and has never chosen to wear before)

Also waist high super skin tight thin leggings at the office or whenever he calls her and tells her to wear them with no panties. Combined with a professional blouse and jacket that ends at her waist. Sitting behind her desk she’s ok but stand up and now EVERYTHING is visible.

She also has to wear them for exercising at the gym

And when going for her daily morning swim at the pool it’s no longer her comfortable conservative one-piece bathing suit but now a tiny bikini. Actually for strenuous swimming being busty, a tshirt swim bikini top combined with tiny bottoms would be perfect. While she’s swimming a gang of young boys jump in the pool right before she has to get out to leave. And the young male life guards could even hide her personal belongings & automobile keys and abuse their power at her expense (ordering her to allow them to apply sun lotion to her skin, give them all massages in the break room... and of course suck their cocks... while she’s underwater!)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Oh

Anonymous 02/13/07 commented about birth control. Good point!

Maybe immediately before they get fucked if the women are given birth control to use - a large suppository they have to struggle to insert themselves in front of everyone

It’d be more uncomfortable if it’d feel like Ben-Gay or Icy Hot - and the side effects would be interesting- increased blood flow - increased sensitivity - nipples very hard and super sensitive

GrantLee:

What’s your thoughts on two things? 1. Titty Fucking 2. Making them give themselves facials - wanking off one guy at a time on thier own face

What about Hall or Jackson order Julie to seduce and fuck neighborhood teenagers or repulsive guys at the firm or her fav coffee shop?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Laura

She’s beautiful and naive and pretty fucking stupid. All things desirable in a little prissy cunt. Hall should arrange an “ass party” for her with several important clients. Not the BFD dudes, but just fat pasty old white guys. Ok, black dudes are fine too, as long as they’re really revolting and humiliating for poor Laura. But a gangbang by colored men is already so cliche. I would prefer a bunch of wrinkled up white old men, like in the chapter about old voyeur neighbor.

More assfucking would be appreciated. As would be more detailed descriptions of how much the women are revolted by the smells and tastes. I like how Pamela didn’t realize it was her own daughter’s cunt that she was tasting on Hall’s fat prick. I hope she’ll figure it out, and get off on it (but hate herself for doing so).

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hi.

Ok I like these stories I really do.

I beginning of this chapter starting off with Julie in the middle of catching cock is good, especially from her perspective.

One thing though. Basically the women are bimbos who every time they’re cocked they go crazy and cum like crazy.

Maybe if instead them just going crazy every time they discover a cock inside them, they would find that they are becoming mentally conditioned to only obtain release and be able to orgasm is when they receive humiliation or pain. However they do not enjoy the abuse thier body’s are needing, but rather it would be something they are forced to ask for (reluctantly) as they discover and try to figure out their new sexuality.

Example-

Julie’s new husband some time after the honeymoon is perplexed that even though she enjoys recieving as before she can’t orgasm. A frustrated mortified Julie who is exhausted and exasperated and desperate to get release soon finds herself making herself try to talk him into fucking her in her ass and to insult her.

Her mystified husband energetically obeys and is surprised when Julie orgasms. A mortified Julie now struggling to breathe under his weight and keenly aware of his iron spike of maleness still embedded and burning in her bottom is left wondering what her future held as she wondered if indeed her own sexuality now needed her to receive and dislike abuse

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Love how the chapter starts with Jackson laughing at Julie while he’s fucking her! Wow! Talk about a shock for her!!! She goes from being in complete control of her life to being a plaything of her boss. She’s used to guys being nice and sweet to her, now a guy snaps his fingers and her meekly obeys no matter what… to the point that he’s fucking her to exhaustion and all the while taunting her with how he’s gonna whore her out and that there’s nothing she can do about it… Yikes that gotta be rough on her!!!

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