All Comments on 'July 4th Party'

Marriage wrecked by conniving bitch Natalie.

Hope Natalie and Greg are ready to pay child support. When the divorce comes through and their friends put it all together not many more July parties much not any others.

When the 3 others kids start questions and dad is not somewhere else. Her parents and his parents look at her with disgust on their faces. Boy what a great time a broken marriage and family. Hard to raise four kids on your own. Now she will never have a life while her x now has time to find another woman that will respect him

Need to flesh this out a bit.

What a pile of unsavoury characters. No recognisably decent person amongst them.

This definitely needs a SaddleTramp sequel.

Why does everyone seem to think that a BBC is the only thing worthwhile?

True friends! They got their goal: another divorced woman for them to pimp out!

This is your idea of erotic fantasy? Seek professional help you need to explain to someone why you feel the need to write a nightmare about cucking and humiliating amd disrespecting a person.

And the divorce will be epic. Hope she likes living alone by herself raining 4kids. That’s really funny ha ha ha

Why don't writers ever refer to Plan B instead of automatic PG?

You should finish the story.

If you’re going with stereotypical black guy with 9” cock, then keep in character. He doesn’t eat pussy. Also, he’s too dominant to follow his wife’s plan to share with others. He just takes for his own pleasure. Also, he wouldn’t consider the idea of his wife edging him at all, let alone a week.

But mostly, there is now way he would trust a white guy to grill ribs and chicken right.

FED UP WITH THIS BULLSHIT!!!!

Ignore the haters. Looking forward to part 2

Wrong category.

Should have been in interracial or non-consent.

6900 views and a very low 2.7* (42% of the available rating) evaluation from the readers, is a really bad way to start. The fetish-cuck tales are disliked by the vast majority of the readers inn this LW category. To get better results, change the category to Interracial or Fetish.

Is this the first chapter in the saga of the dumbest whore in the world?

Low rating due to writer not knowing which category is the proper one. Hint for you interracial stories go in the interracial category.

Shouldn’t be too long before Tara gets handed the divorce papers. Of course then everything that happened here will turn into a regretful mistake

Yum ! I'd welcome him any day !

Wow that was a waste of time. Cliche after cliche.

Need the ending where she is pregnant and how the marriage ends and how the couple suffers

cliche ridden - not that easy to impregnate any woman, not even a 3-time mom

Good story this has happened a lots of times I would imagine!

Would love to have more of your work to read

I hope hubby finds out and fucking shoots all three of them in the head maybe her in her fucking stomach first . My question is who the hell does this bitch Natalie think she is does she like destroying other people's lives are these two lowlifes going to support her and her children when hubby divorces her cheating ass.