All Comments on 'Jungle Bunny'

by Sean Renaud

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ariesgirlariesgirlover 10 years ago

Since she enjoyed herself I think she is going to say yes to being his slave.

Did that guy have unprotected sex with Lacey? She is a stripper slut as the story pointed out so I guess he wasn't too concerned with STDs.

Queen_VickiQueen_Vickiover 10 years ago
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I like it.Please keep it coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
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Needs editing, but it's an unusually good story, written in a raw kind of way. Very impressive.

nene22nene22over 10 years ago
Another chapter?

I liked this story and would love to see where it could go

redlion75redlion75over 10 years ago

what kind of control does the shorty have over her that he can sell her basiclly

Sir GalahadSir Galahadabout 9 years ago

There are some holes in the story, but nothing you can't close up with another chapter. There are a couple of directions this story could go.

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