by mitch99887
Six feet tall with curves? A good story but Phyllis seems unreal. Although, it is fantasy. Well, I guess I'll just imagine her at 5'7". Stay Positive.
Good story but for 2 things. 1.It is naturism not naturalism(that is about flora and fauna not being nude).2.In the last paragraph how did Martha s legs wander to her legs?.Surely you meant her hands wandered?.Apart from that I really enjoyed it as I am a fan of the 1950s.Please write more about these two ladies.
Thanks.
Twowayman62.