All Comments on 'Just a Kiss'

Phenomenal debut. Hope to see more from you.

Wonderful first story. You could really feel the connection between Jean and Keri, like it was more than just a fling for them. I'll be looking forward to any other stories you may write.

5-stars,

A fine first effort. Keep going!

If this was a 'slow burn' it was one heck of a meeting of the virgins. I believe there is a love between two women that they could make love to each other and only each other. And not feel anything for another female.

This story definitely falls into this category.

Great, fun story! Well written! Hope to see more from you.

Great story! Even more amazing for such a great story as a first try. 5

I enjoyed this piece, and it felt like you enjoyed writing and sharing “Just A Kiss.” As a near hopeless romantic git to believe/sense something real between Keri and Jean — not trying to make more of your fun first and their feelings for each other. Whether more between them or not, hope you are encouraged to share more with us.

Great debut story, well done.

Very sweet, and nice natural progression, and both have bits I appreciate very much...a fire bush, and petites.

And nice 'lifetime' hall pass, tho not much time left

OMG what a hot story, had me stretching my panties and leaking lol

loved it. very hot. I do like how it just seemed to happen naturally.

Fantastic and beautiful just doesn't describe it!

Orpheum69

Made me hot! I need more!