All Comments on 'Just a Matter of Time'

Very flat; no tension whatsoever. The situation was a done-deal from the get-go. The 'story', such as it is, should be condensed down to a single, explanatory paragraph, to avoid the sense of tedious repetition.

could have been a much better story if the husband and wife had conversations and discussed what was happening

Loved the story.

author and his stories are wimpy 1*