All Comments on 'Just A Quickie Ch. 02'

Wonderful! Please keep it going. How i envy Julie!

As a female, I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter.... I adore little tits and submissive sluts... how about having her expose herself in public too?

I second the comments of the female reviewer....keep us cumming!

This is a good, hot story, but I think the dialouge lets it down a bit. The spoken bits are all very stataco, they just don't flow very well. Perhaps a liiiiittle more editing? other than that, very cool.

As the first poster said, a hot story flawed by stilted dialogue and atrocious grammar.

If you used your word processor to delete all the apostrophes in the story, you would be a lot closer to using them correctly.