All Comments on 'Just Before Our First Time'

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Wilson SpaldingWilson Spaldingabout 4 years ago

Nicely done!

A little surprising, actually: I usually don't get sucked into stories that are recollections, but this had a nice progression.

5 stars.

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsabout 4 years ago

Wow, tell us what you really think (@Anonymous: More "garbage" posted today) and why is garbage in quotes? I thought this story was a nice tease. I'd love to hear the wife tell some of her recollections of what she got to, even if I can imagine them myself. Good for her, say I!

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