All Comments on 'Just Deserts'

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chytownchytownalmost 12 years ago
Good Read!***

Thanks for sharing.

DesireeFoxDesireeFoxalmost 11 years ago
powerful, you put

so much into each character, they seem so very real.

WargamerWargamerabout 1 year ago

Excellent story, you always build your characters nicely

5/5

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First off, I thrive on feedback; so please fire away when you get the urge. I read it all and it often brings different perspectives. The main thing making me a little unusual is that I'm bi-polar … with some serious medication on board to stay semi-normal. My other character...

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