All Comments on 'Just Keep Swinging'

Great to see this published 😊. Emily

A well crafted and entertaining story, I hope we get to find out if the threesome works out.

Really, really enjoyed this. You have a way of creating the story that is so unique. Thank you for writing this

I quite enjoyed your story. I feel like you conveyed a pretty accurate picture of a matured relationship, of life with small kids and of the desire fo recapture the glory of our youths.

Well done. Thank you for sharing.

You know what I got out of this....that lady loved her cigarettes.

Thanks all for your messages.

The smoking wasn't meant to be the main thing. There is the love for those around her.

But I appreciate the feedback @mftbridges

This is definitely a unique and different spin on Emily's story. :)

Strangely enough, every time I became immersed in the story, the cigarette thing came up and all I could think was about her breath stinking.