by Bazzle
Strangely enough, every time I became immersed in the story, the cigarette thing came up and all I could think was about her breath stinking.
Thanks all for your messages.
The smoking wasn't meant to be the main thing. There is the love for those around her.
But I appreciate the feedback @mftbridges
I quite enjoyed your story. I feel like you conveyed a pretty accurate picture of a matured relationship, of life with small kids and of the desire fo recapture the glory of our youths.
Well done. Thank you for sharing.
Really, really enjoyed this. You have a way of creating the story that is so unique. Thank you for writing this
A well crafted and entertaining story, I hope we get to find out if the threesome works out.