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Many years previously, after giving Rick Marcey's first letter, Leslie had asked Rick, "Are you ok?"
Rick had simply replied "I will be." He had been right.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 month agoThank you for your story, it has some strong reactions in it, like Rick realizing how Marcy felt about his cheating with her misunderstanding and some violence towards the wife-chaser. For your first effort, I liked it. It is not too long, BTW.
This story needs direct input from Deidre, talking to Rick, when we are told that Deidre really worked to poison the well with Marcy. That is an interview Rick needs to have, with someone he respected in the original.
Bad sex with the Doctor is not warranted
Marcy's misbehavior while Hubby was overseas, at the hotel where the hospital staff parked (I think? In Kalimaxos' story), prior to the overseas trip, was also basically ignored.
Anonymousabout 2 months agoSo one BJ equates to a six week fuckfest 15 years later? I think not. Get a grip son.
Anonymous4 months agoYou lied at the start. This most certainly is a RAAC story and your hero is most certainly a wimp who spends most of the story looking for an excuse to keep the slut.
Anonymous5 months agoWTF!!!! You totally fucked up the story. First, you ignore completely the fact that she was betraying Rick when he was in Korea. Also, daddy gave Marcy during that time.
For military man, he was not only seemingly spineless and wimpish, but also laughable. This is a man who commanded other soldiers, and can’t seem to get his shit together. Not Marcy‘s leather, but in the weeks afterwards.
As in several other stories, Deirdre takes an unfortunate hit in the translations. Marcy never asked what she meant, but just assumed. The worst. Worse, she never said anything to Rick so they could iron out what exactly happened. Rick understandably, was feeling guilty even though what happened with a human response. In hindsight, he should’ve at least discussed what happened, but he never thought what would happen in the future with his wife would actually happen.
I’m neutral to their discussions in the hotel, but no way does that excuse Marcy from the huge, disrespect and betrayal, she gave her husband. In spite of everything, if to reconciliation was done, better, could be accepted. But written, it was all a bunch of bullshit.
KRD192545 months agoJimmyTP, you sure took creative twisting the shit out of this story line to make your RAAC.
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You completely left out his time in Korea when she was boinking a doc for months at the Red-Roof. You totally twisted Deidra's character to create a narrative never in the original story.
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1.9** hooyah, to a FU'd alternative.
Anonymous7 months agoWorst FTDS for this story. No content. Pictured a cick, wimpy, husband. Take this crap out from Literotica, please, Jimmy.
fishgetter7 months agoOatmeal19692 months ago
This should be in the non-erotic category****** I agree with Oatmeal, Rick had some great ideas for their end of marriage but went WWIMP on us. 2* is as much as I can give this. It was well written with a typo or two. Overall, the author did well.
Anonymous7 months agoAs bad as the original story was, this ending wasn’t much better. I noticed the author “ downplayed” wifeys little affairs she was having at the motel no-tell, while he was deployed. That was a major piece of intel, that absolutely blew the story line out of the water. This ending assumes wifey thought she had the moral high ground. Besides that, if she really was trying to get back at him for cheating, why would she try to hook him up with the neighbor? There have been several endings to this story. What they all have in common is, they don’t try to change the facts. Wifey wanted to go on this trip, and cheat with Trey. She used the excuse of what the other woman told her, to do that. And even then, wifeys story does not match what the other woman said. At he end of the day, it was all contrived. She wanted to cheat, and made up what the other woman said, to hopefully give her a way to keep the marriage. She failed, as it all came out. And she was thrown on the trash heap. Note to the author- I notice you like to write raacs. That’s ok, but if you have to downplay, or change the facts to do it you would be better off just writing your own story.
