All Comments on 'Just the Beginning'

Excellent work. As one who travels for a living, I can relate. Nicely written, good, crisp dialog, not over the top, but rather realistic. Hope to read more.

Very good Moon, I agree with the dialogue part. Keep it up!

Great story for your first time submitting one to LIT!!! I suggest you continue this saga...I want to know more about the characters and where they will go from there!

I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

~ Honey

I didn't rate my own story, just for the record. just wanted to thank everyone for the comments. I'd kind of like to see where the story goes, too. ;)

ETA.. ok, I had to rate it to get my comment to post, so I gave it 100. :o

Wow,it really show that you really inspired Mister. Good job!

I agree with all of them.........I would LOVE to see what happens next. *wink, wink*...........of course I may be a bit bias.........but I love the story none the less!

you kept me reading, I love the realistic dialog and the realistic things that were going thru the guys mind, I thought it was great!