All Comments on 'Juxtaposition Ch. 02'

It's always a pleasure to find a writer on this site. There's so much crap.

Why did you have to turn this story of two persons that were coming to the realization of their marriage structure transitioning from loving couple to a rape situation? Why does Rodrego who knows this, who appreciates his association with them turn him into an evil mulnipulator who seems to want to degrade them both as if he resented everything they have done for him. As awkward as this situation is the transition could have been more postitive, more loving. You might as well have had Rodrego as a stranger who comes by and rapes her in front of a tied up husband. WHY?

I haven't read this in years. Still one of my favorites. Great work. When are we going to see more, Stardog?

and we all know your mother loves cock as much as you do!! I gave this 5 just for the freakiness!

Normally stories I don’t like I just avoid leaving comments This one was so bad I felt I needed to comment to help others avoid wasting their time reading this piece of trash . I could think of many scenarios that would have made this story interesting but you have succeeded in avoiding every single one of them . I need to pay close attention to your future writing to be sure I don’t waste time on good luck on improving your writing skills

You gotta write part III. You just gotta!

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