All Comments on 'Kate and I Ch. 21-23'

Started out very promising, but the poor pacing, poor editing, and the posting of such short chapters with little or no story advancement is killing it.

I have to agree with the other poster, the chapters are too short and it detracts from the progress of the story. Ayden must be the dumbest vice president around if he can't figure out that Katie is hot for him and it was his name he heard behind her room door. Also the military time issue is out of character for Ayden since he has not been in the services from what we are told.

he went to college and doesnt know the sound or look of a woman jilling off or the after effects?