All Comments on 'Kate at the Party'

I do not agree with the first comment, this story has good potential.

Would have appreciated a bit more build up, it seemed that they had only been at the party for a short time. Why was she so quickly persuaded to go to the bedroom apparently easily?

Did she confess later?

There must have been some forethought about a sexy encounter since she had left off her underwear, more detail please.

A totally nothing story

The literotica population this story will appeal to is extremely small. Even with it being extremely short, I skimmed, only to be disappointed. If your goal in being here is to improve your writing skills, this genre of loving wives is not going to help much. The feedback will be brutal, without any attempt to help you improve, just insult you as caustically as possible. You do have potential, but need work. This tale needs a lot of fleshing out. You are not descriptive in a way that stimulates the reader effectively with a story this short. To hook and interest a reader with this few words is really difficult. Word selection and structure are everything. You did use language that motivated my imaginations. I did not like any of the characters.

Its not a sick fetish B.T.B story so its all good with five stars.

dumb cuck shit.

I love all the protectors of the Literotica Realm who want to tell us what everyone wants on this site. Fucking relax people. If you don’t like it, move on. Quit telling the author what he needs to do, or how fucked up his characters are. This is a site to share your perversions. So quit being the morality police. Find something useful to do. Jeez!!!

Thxs for the quicky , don't worry about the annon inbreds , they think these stories are real .

This tale made me waste 3 minutes of my time.

1* for this lame

They really need to put a separate cuck category in for this stuff

Your pen name tells the story . Glad it was short.

Wasted 3 minutes of my time.....at least this trash of story is short!

1* for this lame

The key to making this work is to talk it out with her. Tell her what you saw, tell her how turned on you were and let her respond. Xoxoxoxoxoxo Annette

I really really wish that there was a different category for this type of consensual closet fetish in LV.

Even though I try to understand, I’m just too narrow minded & conservative to appreciate this type of story. Sorry

Like to hear it form her point of view

Great story I wish my wife would do something like that

I'm sure you would have liked her to lick the man's sperm off her wrist and forearm but it was her first experience and I'm sure you can forgive her for not doing that. Kate is obviously ready for more experiences so I hope you will tell us what happens nextv46

I think Kate is on her way to being a top class HOT WIFE making you a very lucky husband 👍

Kate is a fantastic wife and you need to encourage her to go all the way next time

Great story. I indeed would love more.. I just got my wife to role play with me. I got her to tell me she met a guy at party. When she got home she told me a make believe story as we fooled around and fucked. It was the hottest thing ever.

Valami óriási baj van ebben a Világban ,mind azok aki ilyen történeteket írnak,mind aki sóhajtozva vágyakoznak hasonló helyzetekre mint a fenti írásban szerepel ! Akik ilyen helyzeteket szeretnének,azok nem szeretik eléggé a párjukat,csak az abnormális vágyaik után vannak!Hol van a szerelem,a szeretet,az egymás iránti elkötelezettség a feltétlen hűség,mert ezek a kilengések nem ezt takarják és rendszerint előbb utóbb válásokhoz vezetnek !Tessenek csak a statisztikákat böngészni ezzel kapcsolatban,mert előbb,utóbb vagy egyik vagy másik beleszeret másvalakibe ezáltal és véget ér a kapcsolat!Semmi mást csak gondoljanak az ősi ösztönökre a" Birtoklási" vágyra!!!

You know the story isn’t a good one and the cuck a doodle dos get excited about it. If they want to watch women and lick up another mans cum, they just need to hit the local gay bar. Another one for the circular file.

Told the wife's story with his own name. She is a whore.

I can take Kate okay but the hubby leaves a lot to be desired.