All Comments on 'Kate Beckinsale as Lonely Waitress'

Please keep going! SO erotic!

Absolutely great!!!

I want 2 take a visit there & perhaps get an autograph, if not something MORE from Mrs.B! My gosh, U really know how 2 write erotica. This is perhaps one of the best short stories I have read on this site. U R the equivalent of Ms. Anais Nin for certain. Yum. SO sensual, & the level of detail in your descriptions was amazing: even if you DID repeat yourself a bit, that is! Oh well, OverALL Ur story was top-caliber material. Keep writing this type of stuff, Ok!

hugs

Your eye for erotic writing is very indulging. I must say, you give a lot of intimacy and I like it. I really hope to see more from you, with such an outstanding story.<p>also, congratulations on a first time story being very outstanding. Not many new writers are able to grasp the whole good story writing.<p>-Acer -_^

Wow just found this and have to say it's awesome stuff. Is there more though? Ended slightly abruptly but otherwise fantastic and hoping for more!

Good story, but, please, learn to use commas!