All Comments on 'Kathryn'

This story rocked. The only reason I didn't 5-Star it was due to a liberal peppering of easily-avoided grammatical errors; word-omissions & semantics - dumb stuff like that - which made the story seem 'uncared-for'. And it's easy to see that you can do yourself better; what an well-crafted story.

Immediately added it to my faves. Flow, style, imagery & presentation are all great. Just take more care grammatically or have someone proof for ya.

Scintillating stuff! More of these two's adventures - please! :)

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