All Comments on 'Kathryn Has a Visitor'

Thank you

It's a nice little short story, but there is so much interesting potential in the seeming dichotomy between her public professional life and private personal life. I'd love to see an extended story revolving around the single thread of her law(?) career leading to the eventual metaphorical if not literal (though probably will be) climax of meeting Daniel at the House. The disparity between the two would help make the day to day interesting, and the story you currently have makes me curious about who she is outside of the House, even if sex/bdsm doesn't get involved until the very end, although there's no problems with that. The build up might even amp up the emotional chemistry and make it truly spectacular. Right now I don't get to know Daniel quite long enough for the feeling of attachment I need to take my enjoyment of a story to the next level.

I did enjoy the read, though. Thanks for writing it!