All Comments on 'Katie Becomes a Queen Ch. 01'

I love most femdom stories and and i thought this one was written very well, the only downside is when the wife/mistress/woman 'forces' her man to be raped by another man. As is say, that was a turn off, but rest of story was good.

Very hot!

While I'm enjoying catching up on your stories, I have a technical comment. For example, when you write, "shoving the laptop aside to really look at it", you have the reader wondering why the wife wants to look at the laptop, since that is the subject of the sentence. Instead of "it", it would have been clearer to write, "shoving the laptop aside to really look at her husband's cock". There were other examples, but my point is, please find an editor. Thanks!

it's time for a couple more additions to the story please!

good story. very enjoyable