All Comments on 'Katie First Wicked Weasel'

I'm guessing American English isn't your native language. Made it extremely hard to read. May I suggest an Editor to assist you in this? My thought. Wicked Weasel bikinis are fantastic!

2 stars

DragonRider55

That Princess Katie is real and you can and should follow in twitter only makes this story better!

In a strange way, the use of the broken language made the story rather cute. Even if it had been written in perfect English it would have been a rather sweet and naive little story as told by a young girl who was still discovering the fun of being a cock-tease.

Please keep writing, Katie. There aren't enough young female authors submitting stories on Literotica. And keep practising that English. Perhaps read a few of the other female authors such as Girl In The Moon or One Hit Wanda to see how they describe erotic situations from a young woman's viewpoint. Chloe Tzang is also one who describes young female situations very well.

Lue

Great story and a real turn on for me. I can't wait to read more!

Wonderful story! Please write more!