All Comments on 'Katie Kant Breaks Out Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Lots of fun for the boys, and Katie Kant.

Plenty of opportunity for corrections and grammar slips that a read aloud might catch.

Your story line is developing well and, actually, is quite believable.

Tighten up and you will become a leader in this genre.

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