All Comments on 'Katie's Quest Ch. 02'

Excited for the next chapter!

So far, so good. Everything seems to be going according to Katie's plan, but I wonder... Kieran seems like he's got a hefty chip on his shoulders. I look forward to seeing things from his perspective.

Looks like this is going to be a bit of a slow burn, huh? I like what I've been seeing so far; there are a few grammar errors and typos here and there, but nothing too egregious. I will be watching the development of this story with great interest.

I LOVE this story! I can’t wait for the next update. I love all the build up and descriptions. Kieran seems like a promising prospect and Katie is just full of boundless determination to achieve her goal.

I enjoyed this chapter. I see the potential of this story keep going. I'm interested in seeing where this story will go next