All Comments on 'Katrina Ch. 02'

Nice. And consistent with what preceded it.

Your character voice is, as you predicted, becoming more "English."

Not Brit, though.

One other teensy fixie.

Too = Extreme Too large. Too sexy.

And it's ALSO. We went too.

I'm ready for some yummy sexual development.

When am I not? :+))

Another great story. I like the way that your are building up the sexual urges of Katrina and adding her sexy friend Elizabeth to the mix. I look forward to reading your next story.