All Comments on 'Katrina Grimm P.I. Pt. 01'

The adventures of private detective Grimm are going to fun to follow if this first piece any indication. So happy that there is promise of more. In just a short space we get to know Kat and enjoy delightfully intense sex. Love closing conductor’s line.

oh baby i love it. Love the image of Cassandra it brings to mind.

Really enjoyed the build up, then the seduction. I thought the conductor was the killer. Loved the description Cassandra.

hot

Excellent first chapter. I am very excited to see you publish this my dear friend

Love you. Follow your heart, mind, and soul.

Great story and just loved how it all developed

Very hot and arousing. An excellent start and I look forward to further adventures of Kat Grimm.

keep it up. Really like this character and cant wait to see what other trouble she gets into

Excellent short story!

Great character development and a nice bit of sex!

Awesome! This was great! I love Detective stories, especially noir! You did an excellent job of world building while progressing the story! I loved the atmosphere for this story dark and a little foreboding! The seduction was hot intense!

Another wonderful story to read in 4 parts.

I enjoyed the way you started and built on the character. She sounds like an experienced investigator. The sex was, well exciting to say the least. Casual sex on a train from a complete stranger and possible killer, that in itself would be enough to bring forth a climatic finally.