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He grips me tighter, pulling me back against every thrust. I can't even think clearly. At the moment my whole world is his hard dick pounding my ass. Every inch surging, plunging, driving me wild but using me for his pleasure.
"Oh good good girl!" Katy moans, somewhere beneath me. "You're taking him so deep, so hard...I can feel him all through you!"
I have the vague feeling of her gripping me a little tighter. Behind me I hear him grunt and groan and squeeze my hips so hard it hurts a little. He shoves his rock-hard dick so deep I swear I can feel him in the back of my throat...but then he lets go!
Feeling the wet sticky burst makes my head spin. He lets out a guttural moan and keeps fucking me! The sensation of feeling him cum sends another orgasmic rush through my body. I'm moaning loudly, quivering and shaking around his cock as he thrusts a few more times, pumping me full of warm jizz.
Finally, he pulls out with a satisfied grunt. I feel his cum leaking out of my ass, and dripping down the backs of my thighs. Then my body seems to go numb, and I collapse onto the bed.
Katy catches. My mind is numb and blank, but she's making cooing noises about how proud she is of her little slut. I curl into her arms, barely able to keep my eyes open. I hear her say something like; "This is just the beginning babygirl."
I don't know what that means. I don't know if I sleep, or doze, or if my mind is just completely shut down. I don't know when he leaves. I don't what will happen when I wake up, but even in my haze, I can't wait to find out.
- COMMENTS
Sweetboysub4uover 4 years agoLoved it truly amazing, I wish I was fucked like that. Want to feel a big hard cock i n my pussyass, hope there is more to come
pervynagakingover 4 years agoOn the one hand, Katy is presented to us as a confident, dominating woman, completely in control of her sexuality and the creator of the setup. Then, despite all this, she's forced into a submissive role and finds herself unable to resist his MANLY MANLINESS. It just reeks of power fantasy, not helped at all by the fact that the guy never even got a name, to allow easier projection.
On the other hand, a strong man fucking a girl and a girly boy at the same time pushes a lot of my buttons. I love the scenario, it's just the characterization that I find dodgy. And hey, it's your story and erotic stories are usually wish fulfillment, so feel free to disregard my comment if you want. It just didn't sit well with me.
In the end, I can't play the critic with this hard-on, so I guess it's a good enough story.
wylderosover 4 years agoThe narrator can't know what inner sensations Katy is feeling. The references made should be prefaced by "she told me later that she experienced..." or, " I sensed that she was feeling... or, "I could only guess that she was having..." or language to that effect.
One of the disadvantages of writing in first person, though I like it because of the inner turmoil and intimacy. Third person omniscient observer would allow the luxury, but it is less impactful.
Otherwise, an erotic romp that got me going on a frosty Monday morning!
I'd like to meet a hot little sissy with your imagination.
And with a pretty little bottom as displayed on your profile.
Which you should add to for your adoring fans!
Like me.
Thanks for your work!
Anonymousover 4 years agovery exciting, made me imagine I was there. I can't wait to continue reading ...
