All Comments on 'Keep Looking...'

Particularly that both parties are into the experience. Great job!

I generally love all your shorts, but this one was more powerful. Its an amazing short. I found myself almost wanting her to fall victim to her own hypnosis but almost just as glad she didn't.

The loss of control & power by Sam to Leah was so erotic

Holy damn. This is a gem. You made a great thing :)

Brilliant work. Short, well written and hot as hell. I can't find any downsides in the story. My gratitude is unmeasurable and my day is improved!

Although I'm not as eloquent as the last poster, I totally agree. So well, thought out and written! Among the best of its kind.