All Comments on 'Keeping Her Happy'

Sorry didn't care for story, only average.

Nothing really to like here, to much and became ”legere impotens“.

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Hey Jazz, I found this story somewhat boring, I tried to read all your words but couldn’t so I skimmed through many paragraphs after you established the pattern of fucking the wife/slut received from one to two to three to very(too) many. You know that introducing conflict between the two mc’s would have deepen the story. It might have forced the readers to react to the conflict/arguments, might have made the readers choose sides, pick which mc is right in their feelings. All we really got to experience is how big of a loser soft Willy is and the journey from virgin to slut to prostitute for Katie. I realize that this site is erotica not drama but imho the stories with some drama added to the sex always enhances the feelings of the readers. I should also say if you write to help a fellow rub one out then I should never mind and thx for indulging.

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