All Comments on 'Keeping Pace'

by The_O_State

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Anonymousalmost 8 years ago

Stupidest dialog ever written

Can you keep up? Of course, can you keep up? Yeah, can you? WTF? What are they, three years old?

impo_61 almost 8 years ago

Just a scene from a marriage...

Just a scene from a marriage...a little monotonous but not bad...2*

Anonymousalmost 8 years ago

I appreciate the effort, but this has too little or too obscure of a plot to be enjoyable.

All the innuendo and vague dialogue was distracting, not suspenseful nor intriguing. Glad they are enjoying their marriage. Other than that I really didn't get much out of this story. Was I supposed to?

Anonymousover 7 years ago

Good one

I can see why all the angry comments and bad rating. These people check out the loving wife category looking for cheating / cuckolding / btb stories. They don't understand 'loving' actually might mean just that, 'loving'. I have read stories with even shorter plot, but no one seemed to mind. Here they were angry because they didn't find what they were looking for. But, The_O_State, you keep up doing the good job.

26thNC almost 4 years ago

Good story about a loving wife and husband. Best thing is pissing off the ducks.

Anonymousabout 1 year ago

Average. 3 stars. Not bad-not good.

Bill S.

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