All Comments on 'Kelli's Descent Ch. 04'

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aznlookinguyaznlookinguyover 9 years ago
turning up the heat

Awesome chapter, punches all my buttons, that is for sure.

steph2004stersteph2004sterover 9 years ago
Yes!

What a wonderful way to wake up this morning, reading a hottttttt chapter over a hot cup or coffee. Can hardly wait for the next chapter, if they keep going like this.

jleetechiejleetechieover 9 years ago
Agree

I agree with many of the respondents. It may not be overly original, but there is enough to make it worthwhile and relatively erotic.

kajkellikajkelliover 9 years agoAuthor
thank you

we are working hard on the next chapter, to be posted in a day or two

ElizabethOliverfieldsElizabethOliverfieldsabout 9 years ago

I hope she ends up breaking completely and accepting and loving her new life forever.

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I should have been born under the three moons of Gor. Since I was not, I have to make the best of it with my fantasies in story form.

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