All Comments on 'Kelly Takes a Turn Ch. 12'

Thanks for continuing the story.

Hopefully she ends up being really cruel to David and something tragic happens to him for her to get off on.

I was hoping Kelly would get her nipples pierced in this chapter just like she said she’d sport some bling for her master.

I'm so excited that you've returned to this series; it'd been quite a while before the two recent updates.

I know David's role isn't central to the story, but for the obvious reasons he's the character I most relate to so I'm eager to see the role you see him filling in this story as it continues. I'm very interested to see what you think his role should be in Kelly's life as she improves her sex life.

David reminds me about how I was few years back.

I hope when the saga completed, he gets a respectable ending by showing Kelly the door and Kelly should end up regreting destroying her marriege for jungle fever.

Awesome cheating slut. The sluttier the cheating the hotter it gets. Hope the black cock adventures continue lustfully to please many black men

Awesome story again, please keep it up

I had a very slutty lover who was engaged to another man who only visited her on weekends leaving me to fuck her and share her as I pleased during the week. Whenever he phoned her and I was present, I made a point of pushing my cock into her mouth while he spoke and then deep into her ass while she told him how much she loved him and then her mouth again- amazingly erotic for me. Loved married cheating sluts- thst make the best fucks. Can't wait for the rest of the story. Hopefully your man doesn't know you write these stories and you're cheating on him just like this

Wondering if it’s time to make David a sissy, cross-dresser slut to serve Kelly and her “friends”.

Hello Dee. I really love what you wirte. In one hand life is easier when David is not in the city and we are willing to read no ending fucks with the whole basketball team. But in the other hand truth is that we love to have David around. He on the phone is very good but at some point should be closer. For my personal taste naked, roped and caged but certainly hidden or just present are good options. The important point is that he is not comfortable but overwhelmed by lust and humilliation.

Again, quite superb. While the descriptions of the sex are excellently done, the real power of this story lies in Kelly’s attitude to and treatment of David, and his torment. Very hard to get this right ( in fiction and in life actually), and you get it just spot on.