All Comments on 'Kelsey Cums Home Ch. 01'

There is no real story here. Open marriage stories are not particularly interesting unless there is something more.

A little more depth on the characters. The story itself wasn't bad

Nothing really worthwhile, just another skanky wife with an idiotic husband.

A dog for a wife. How can she really be called a wife and not a convenience?

Nope…..

Rubbish

Not bad. She clearly loves her husband and he’s fine with her activities.

I am curious though, would she give up her side guys if he asked?

This is FETISH. Put it there.

Hmm. Looks like another cheating slut story to me.

So polysexual means attracted to more than one gender, where was the lesbian action then? Or was it her husband slurping out a creampie since sperm lasts for days in a pussy.

So the bitch whore in this story has kids? How sad for the bastard when they find out no one knows who the father is because the bitch fucked so many cocks she has lost count and has no idea which cock belongs to who, and of course the gullible dumb cuck husband loves getting tenth sloppy cum from his whores crust covered cunt.

Nice writing, but no drama other than Jason’s arrival.

Okay first of all, ignore all the haters. This is the most challenging category to write for. I can see what Katib was thinking but if you were going for the sort of 'just the facts' feel that this is a day in her life without 'drama' then it works great. I do think that perhaps she is more polyamorous and perhaps polysexual but I can see both sides. Also, one the whole cuck thing, there is no obligation in a polyamorous relationship to tell everyone everything. Yet another territorial issue that men can't seem to get past. No, overall I think it is an excellent first effort and I look forward to your future works. 5 stars from me.

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From my perspective to the rest of you whiners. Write something, publish it then we will see, otherwise man up and use your names instead of hiding in the shadows of Anonymous. Otherwise hush up and clean your empty beer cans up in mummy's basement.

I love hot wife stories. 5 Stars.

Why do I think that she would blow a gasket if the husband got so much as a warm hug and a cheek kiss from another woman!

"SerradaC:

Okay first of all, ignore all the haters. ... From my perspective to the rest of you whiners. Write something, publish it then we will see, otherwise man up and use your names instead of hiding in the shadows of Anonymous."

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1> After 5800 views this tale has not even reached the 3*, and this means that it has been very much disliked. If a story get a lot of negative feedback, like almost always happens to the fetish-cuck tales in this LW category, this doesn't mean that thousands of users are "haters", like you, the real "hater", said.

2> The only "whiner" in this comment thread seems to be you, with all this hatress.

3> The users, by the platform rules, are not required to publish some stories, before giving their feedback, positive or negative. So, what are you talking about ?

4> with your nickname, a fake identity, you are anonymous like all other users, since every user in this platform (reader or writer), can have multiple nicknames and interact with multiple fake identities, including the anonymous one. So, we are ALL anonymous. Put your hatress aside and let the users express freely their feedback, positive or negative, as long as they follow the platform rules.

I too would say to ignore all the haters, but in fact its really only one sick little puppy who writes al the nasty comments. And his incessant whining about the wrong category gets very old. This story is 100% in the correct category.

Great story and well written.

My wife is allowed to play on her business trips like this main character. I often wonder how she is with some of her lovers.

When you can't

even get the title without a grammar error, you know it's gonna be a scrappy story.

Call it what you will, it is just another gutter slut story.

Absolutely nothing new or interesting just more pablum formula slut/cuckold story.

The kid will be some unknown sperm donor's kid. She probably got her husband to have a vasectomy also.

polysexual , bs just a slut

"Okay first of all, ignore all the haters. This is the most challenging category to write for."

Lol that's not necessarily true at all. Most of the stories on here are little more than masturbation material. That requires some imagination and ability to write detailed sex scenes. Plots are secondary most of the time. Character development ? What's that.

Get an editor as you would then pick up the difference between message and massage or celebret and celibate.

The water scolded her, presumably due to her lover using the wrong whole? Spell chuckers only take you so fa.

SerradaC said:

"Okay first of all, ignore all the haters... [So ignore serradaC too as obviously there is some hate there]

...This is the most challenging category to write for... [I agree, as exhibited by the sheer volume of mis-categorized stories that appear here]

...Also, one the whole cuck thing, there is no obligation in a polyamorous relationship to tell everyone everything... [So serradaC admits that lying by omission is no worse than the cheating that a polyamorous woman engages in. For the polyam woman, her feelings of dominance over men are what drives her. Her relationship with her husband gives her this sense of superiority over men in general. Polyam women likely pick "mates" they can manipulate.]

...territorial issue that men can't seem to get past... [Territorial issues like you married a man and promised EACH OTHER to be faithful to EACH OTHER and not become a cum dumpster for a bunch of strangers you hide from your husband? You mean territorial like that? Peter gave NO indication that he knows about his wife's adultery. He made no statement specifically displaying knowledge that she was being sexually active while away. How would she react if Peter was hidding the same level of sexual involvement with other women? Would she be territorial?]

From my perspective to the rest of you whiners.... [You're the one whining.]

...Write something, publish it then we will see, otherwise man up and use your names instead of hiding in the shadows of Anonymous... [Are you serious? Simple logic dictates everyone on Literotica is anonymous! Unless an individual specifically uses their real identity, everybody has a username or just posts under anonymous. BECAUSE, who the heck wants yet another freaking account to maintain and log in and out of? It is simpler to just get on line and read a story! And thanks to Literotica for that small favor.]

...Otherwise hush up and clean your empty beer cans up in mummy's basement." [You like to censor other people's views? Especially if they differ from yours? Grab a beer, head down to your mum's basement and chill a bit. You'll feel better.]

Big no. You want to write cuck stuff? Write cuck stuff. But note that the preponderance of readership on Loving Wives views that genre for what it is. Fetishism. As such there will always be kick back in regard to these stories being posted in LW. There IS a SPECIFIC category for fetish. There IS a difference between cuck stories and stories about loving wives. Why does Literotica ignore the ongoing rivalry over Loving Wives? Who knows. I would love to see a more precise definition for all the categories. I think it would solve some of the problems. That and closer moderating?

To the moron below talking about categories. All I can say is read the damn description of this category. “Married extramarital fun, sharing, swinging and more.” What part of that small little brain of yours can’t understand that this story absolutely fits into this category. Just because you have a tiny mind and can’t accept this lifestyle doesn’t mean you get to dictate where it goes. The title loving wives is about making love to wives. There is a separate Romance category for couples in love. But you just can’t wrap your head around the fact that others enjoy these stories. Personally I would prefer they change the name of the category to Slutty wives or something, just to shut up your incessant whining.

Loved the interaction between the husband and wife. A great couple and a hot story.

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“Would read again and again.”- HrnyHswf

I often wonder if my wife ever does something like this on her trips. At times it turns me on to think about it. She’s a sexy 32 year old redhead that travels to help set up new franchises. She might be away up to three weeks at a time. I’ve kind of hinted to here about being free to enjoy sex while away, but she plays things close to the chest and doesn’t ever give me any hints that she has.

We have close friends who kind of live this lifestyle. In fact it was him that turned me on to these stories. They seem to be so happy and close. Unlike most of our other friends who always seem to bicker and fight. I wonder if it’s true that couples who are open and honest like this are happier. I know that in an article I read it said that the divorce rate among couple who play like this is less than half the National average. I think I’m going to bring this up with my wife.

DeShawn. It seems to be hard for writers to come up with names for black characters. DeShawn and Jamal being the new Tyrone of yesteryear. Other than that, I’m glad to see that he was a doctor and not some thug. Overall this was enjoyable.

Enjoyed reading your story and hope you have more coming.

I ended the story. You should write more about her. May I suggest you write more about her interactions with her colleagues at work and with her children. She seems to want to hide her lifestyle from the outside world.

Poly sexual means she’ll screw anything, even a big black clown.

Oh god !!!!!