All Comments on 'Kept Ch. 01'

i would like to read more and hope that if you continue you would flesh out the story more right now it's kinda flat and a little lack luster. But with a little more detail it could definetly win a 5 star rating from me

do continue. This story shows potential.

I would like for you to continue the story. It has many possibilities.

The story is way too rushed and told too matter of factly. There is not enough description, or any thought given to the psychology of the characters. I don't feel anything for them and I don't sense chemistry between them. It just leaves me feeling numb. Maybe a bit more research into creative writing would do wonders for the author.

This has to be written by a man!

His dick might feel better if her tits are tightly bound and he is thrusting between them.