All Comments on 'Kevin and Dawn Pt. 02'

Wow! Why couldn't I have had an Aunt Vickie when I was there age? I can only imagine what she has in store for the rest of the weekend. I can't wait for part 3! Well done!

I like the twist with Vickie. Well done! 5 stars.

In the story, you used the phrase ' devout bisexual'. I don't think that was an accurate way to get the idea across. I believe that you should have said something like 'avid bisexual' instead.

Personally, I'm turned off by all of the bondage and spanking. I realize that some people get a thrill from it, but I equate it with abuse. I was physically abused as a child and teenager. There is no love and affection expressed by such behavior. But to each their own.

A great read, you could doing some extra proofreading as although the word is correctly spelt it has been used in the wrong context, i.e. read for ready, there for their, also he for her.

I stayed with my aunt one summer…She caught me trying on her black bra….I came immediately..so so hard…

Everyone needs an aunt like vickie...nice story plot and well written.