All Comments on 'Kevin and Kelsey Pt. 03'

This part was three times better than the first two. So congratulations on finally hitting your stride. It still falls short of a five star effort, but you're getting there. 4/5

Beautiful. sooooo beautiful. Thank You.

No doting grandparents, even in absentia? You would have thought they’d be more active in finding their distant children. Parents always think the worst; had to suspect babies after being gone almost two years.

Seems like some substance is missing.

Putting on the KY then putting him into her mouth? EEWWWW

Great Job... Loved it!!!!

Hot, sexy, sweet story from the beginning, even a bit romantic. Kudos awarded. Really enjoyed it, overall.

Siblings got closer as well, it seemed not to be just about sex, but the quick move to buttsex last chapter was a little odd.

KY was unnecessary in this chapter, would have helped buttsex last chapter. Sis then sucking him and drooling on him... 1) Already covered in KY, gross 2) all that saliva and her getting turned on by blowing him, he would slip right into her.

Parental support would have been nice, Mom is about to come around on her feelings, if she has not already.

Good luck to our fictional couple!