All Comments on 'Key Card'

Really expressive, descriptive and creative. Good technique. Glad to read this, as it was a perfect start to my afternoon

Best dialog and ideas in a while. I was sad when she left the room. Please keep going!

I loved it. Well done. I wish I was him.

Awesome. Now we need chapter 2 to find out how you coped till the morning, and if you got discovered by the maid service (hopefully).

Ohhhhhhh! My Balls! 😫😵😮😲😱. 🤜🏻⚾️⚾️🏏