All Comments on 'Keys for My Birthday'

by TiltingatWindmills

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Super hot, as always!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Another part please

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This story was well written and pretty exciting but l hope l’m dead and gone before that sort of thing becomes a reality.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This story is really good but kind of scary.

totallyrealtotallyrealover 1 year ago

Well written - especially appreciated the turn at the ending there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

great story, i was hoping his sister would just marry him after training him to her liking. then he would never get to feel the inside of her pussy with his cock..

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent ! Please continue writing the same way !

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great stuff. Big fan of incest chastity where the caged family member is stuck in the same house as their keyholder/tormentress

NightroNightroover 1 year ago

This one was pretty good but I don't think she was a very good keyholder. She was too selfish and immature. She could have at least allowed supervised masturbation once in a while.

RegretsRegretsover 1 year ago
A Masterpiece

Her control was delightful and she was fully aware of her privilege bestowed by the new laws. If that is all it takes to produce multitudes of such entitled and devious young women then bring it on

Without knowing why he did not throw aside all caution and grab his dick when he was not caged, which must be because of terror of the new laws I still think that handcuffs used with his hands behind him would have been more erotic, but this was plainly not at all conceivably necessary. Let us hope that such a nightmare scenario never comes about, entirely……and yet, ahhhh.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Just have one question who did Theo marry? Was it one of her friends or his ex?

TiltingatWindmillsTiltingatWindmillsover 1 year agoAuthor

To answer your question, Anonymous, I think Theo's fiancee has to be someone we haven't met in the story yet (so neither one of her friends or an ex) since she is from out of country and unfamiliar with chastity customs.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Very creative story, and style!

I really enjoyed this.

Let's hope that society becomes real soon. Real Female will certainly involve school age training.

SenhorMastoSenhorMasto9 months ago

I loved the scenario, ambient, world, characters, scenes and acts . Could you please write another story where the keyholder and the caged guy are not enemies ???

TiltingatWindmillsTiltingatWindmills9 months agoAuthor

Have you tried Memoirs of a Keyholder? Or Her Uncle's Keyholder?

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