All Comments on 'Kidnapping of a Were'

by rpault

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Obviously emulating partwolf, and there are lots worse authors you could look up to.

I do think that too many characters were introduced too quickly, and the adoptive parents were _WAY_ too accepting. Why did they keep her in silver jewelry? (Or is that something you'll reveal, later?)

WolfkittyWolfkittyover 2 years ago

The rape in this story does not not need to happen! Carrie kidnappers should have been keeping a close eye on her. So, her getting kidnap, again by another group, and then being rape is a little too much to believe!

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