by rpault
Obviously emulating partwolf, and there are lots worse authors you could look up to.
I do think that too many characters were introduced too quickly, and the adoptive parents were _WAY_ too accepting. Why did they keep her in silver jewelry? (Or is that something you'll reveal, later?)
The rape in this story does not not need to happen! Carrie kidnappers should have been keeping a close eye on her. So, her getting kidnap, again by another group, and then being rape is a little too much to believe!