by JanetMon
oooooo the 1st time the collar encircles my neck, I could just melt.
I sooooo love this story, and you are writing it beautifully
I can't wait to see how far outside the box Kelly goes :)
passively hooked
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this is the part where it took a major down word turn in my opinion, I don't think I will read anymore of this
I loved this so much. Kim's gradual descent is well-handled as is her surrender to the dynamic. You write well, and really speak to those of us who have been here.
Domination/submission stories bore me to death when the activities just turn out to be 100% standard and predictable. Why is there so seldom any creativity in this D/s process? I like these stories very much when you can't tell what is going to happen, but this is not that. Also, I hate preachy self-appointed experts, and Dr. Kelly seems to be just lecturing Kim like she's enrolled in a course. Will there be a quiz later?
This is a well written story.
However I will not be reading any more as I find public humiliation stories to be disturbing.
I also despise the concept that a complete stranger would know what another person wants or needs better than that person. Or that any person would so willingly and easily yield to a complete stranger. Absurdly unbelievable. And yet it is the premise on which most D/s stories on this site are based.
Add to that is the unbelievable fantasy about being collared and leashed by a complete stranger in a public setting. I believe the appropriate Americanism is "I call bullshit."