All Comments on 'Kim's Story Ch. 01'
by KimHoney
- 20 Comments
Anonymousabout 12 years agoGood story - liked hearing about another 'innocent' white girl becoming a slut for big black cock. I'm sure Ron will train her to fuck the brothers soon.
Anonymousabout 12 years agowhether they went to college at all or not
someone has fuck guys like this black women wont
Anonymousabout 12 years agoExtremely well written story and quite erotic. You have a flavor to writing which is unique. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Anonymousabout 12 years agolove it.
i love the thought of you taking a BBC and loving it.
would love to lick you clean when he's done with you.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoOkay, the storyline is hot. The poor grammar and spelling knocked at least 2 stars off my rating. 1. What woman works out in pumps? 2. What gym outside of Hollywood or NYC charges $50k/year? You're (as opposed to "your") off to a good start, but damn, get an editor to proof your story.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoHow sad and depressing for you. Your self worth and self esteem must be zero.
GettingItDoneabout 12 years agoLove your story so far, and can't wait for more of it. Keep it up and you will have plenty of faithful readers. If I could make one suggestion, it would be to add in some humiliation, and possibly some public exposure.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoI never could understand you yanks and your moronic obsession with the big black cock!!! HAHAHAH... Even my black friends here get embarrassed by this sort of shit! Bunch of fucking losers! Go on then, all you California type Blondie's, submit to your black masters. LOL If that's the best you can do for a fantasy, it's pretty pathetic really...
Anonymousabout 12 years agoIf the critics don't like the theme of the story, they have the option to not select it. To cast low votes because you don't like the category is ridiculous. Funny part is the wankers actually selected the story to read before criticizing it.
You write what you like, readers view what they choose. That's how it works.
Spelling, grammar and continuity could stand some work, but that stuff is easy to fix.... good writing and a great start on a storyline. Keep it up and ignore the wankers.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoWe Yankshmmm. While the Greeks invented homosexuality, you Brits have refined it, expanded upon it and elevated the act of buggery to the status of religion; until the word has become part of your everyday language despite your pathetic tiny wankers, therefore, bugger off..hahahahahahahahah
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Please use them the next time you write because they will make the story readable. Thanks,
2275jrabout 12 years agoWell i like this first of your stories kim's story as you call it.
it got more horny as the story went on . so dont give up keep them cumming.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoYou fucked up jerks. Worshipping a chicken neck-like piece of black flesh like your life depended upon it. You are crazed animal cretins who should be serving as slave labor. There is nothing cool or noble about you inter-racial garbage. You are perfect proof that your brain and limbic system is useless, all you are is a flesh stack of lust. You provide holes to fill and masturbate over illusions. You sub human moronic slaves to the ugly, the stinking and the evil.
Anonymousover 9 years agoI'm sorry but the description of this chapter is hilarious. It makes it seems like Kim is God's gift to mankind.
EdwardWalterover 4 years agoNice build up for BBC addiction series . My hard white dick is looking forward to seeing Kim become an 'ambassador' for the gym.
