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When I read the following sentence, at the very beginning of the story, I assumed that we were in for a 4th grade level product.

Back then, the internet was nonexistent, so was I was pretty much clueless sex.

But apparently, it was just a rogue mistake that was missed. I didn't see many other places that I would have edited. Honestly, only read about 2/3 of the first page,it just wasn't my cup of tea - nut it did seem to be rather well written, my initial fear was misplaced.