All Comments on 'Kissing Tracy Ch. 01'

this one hot story love to read more of it

Awsome story would like to hear more:)

You have a good plot, but you need a proof reader to eliminate spelling errors and minor other flaws.

Tell us more. Tell us more.

I just loved your story, but I do agree that it could use some proof-reading. The story was great, but when you have to re-read lines and paragraphs because the author merged two thoughts without finishing the first, it gets a little difficult to follow. Just wanted to bring that to your attention without insulting you or counting it against your score for the story. Keep writing, but re-read it or ask an editor to take a look at it before it is submitted. If you ASKED for an editor, then they need an editor too!

You did well! More, please.

one of the worst most poorly written stories on the site way to many wrong words and extra words glad you never wrote any more.

An alright story, but didn't like the ending. Needs a sequel.

I really liked the story, I can hardly wait for the next chapter!