All Comments on 'Kitchen Submission'

When Lucy said "it was my first time... receiving" I expected her to reveal that she'd given before. With Gretchen, naturally.

Loved it, very hot and very arousing. Five stars,

Very nice! I loved the acknowledgment that the sub is not without their own power in these kinds of relationships and the dropping back into an affectionate interchange at the end.

How refreshing! The utter absence of any character resembling a Mary Sue. Nothing but two people navigating a brand new relationship in a heady mixture of fear and lust. Anna and Lucy have so much potential as they learn from one another. Amanda, if you write anymore about this duo, and I hope you do, let them grow organically, let them make mistakes like everyone does. Don’t rush! I can see them growing over a period of years. Please let them.