by LFFemdom
Honestly? While I liked the pussy torture, I also liked where the story was going with the Domme/sub dynamic of Ava and Tabatha. I want to see them get closer emotionally - maybe even see Ava take on Tabatha permanently.
Excellent story
Perhaps Tabitha would like to have her nipples, labia and clit pierced and ringed at her next session with Ava
A little bit on the extreme side for me but it was still a damn good fantasy.
Thanks for sharing
Tess (uk)
This story appealed to me as a lesbian,until you kept referring to her engorged clitoris as a small cock etc.I suggest you remove the word 'cock' if you want to appeal to lesbians.Also be more specific in your descriptions of the sexual acts,and add emotion etc.
Such an awesome story! Definitely my favorite fantasy <3 No notes!! :) (Aside from maybe keep it extreme and even more/harsher!)