All Comments on 'Knight in Shining... Ch. 03'

finally

But strange; shows a bored mind, maybe over reading? makes me think that you corrected the story so much it just lost the fire.....another thing is that you could find good wording but then you get to.... Bakini, Jeens and Aerolias?? it's like 2 persons writting....

I know it's not easy to express your ideas and that you cannot just ask anyone to help out with your story but....give it a try.

Take your time at the erotic content!!

Glad you finally added some more, sucks it was so short

Is this the last chapter?or page as it really is...been 7 months,just wondering if you are coming back to finish this or,just another one left hanging,,,

New to this story but already I like it! The couple's dynamic is really cute, the inner dialogue from Kasen especially. It's really adorable, so rare to find.. Keep writing!