All Comments on 'Korrupting Kayla Pt. 04'

Awesome to have you posting again!

Loved it! Great to see an update.

Love your stories, always excited to see a new chapter!

I love your sick stories. Glad to see an update for this story. You have a real talent for writing erotica. I wonder how deep will Cumhole fall ;)

Amazing story so happy to see it getting continued! Easily my favourite author. Please keep it going.

Excellent series. Looking forward to reading the next one.

Need more

Looking forward to the next chapter

great series. Tell us more

I wish her brother had fucked her.

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. Book two is now available, and many wishes are granted.

Instead of making a book 2 its own series, we are steered into chapter 5 that goes without any climax for chapter 4. And right away there's a bunch of substories that are mandatory to make any sense of the story. You seem to have a pattern, just as in your Titcage series, you get really going, all of the pistons pumping, and your story becomes a must read, but then all of sudden you go down a direction that totally takes a nosedive, and then you literally sabotage your own story, and throw a bunch of hand grenades at your audience for good measure. You can't just throw out a bunch of unrelated material with side characters when your lone character was the only main character 4 chapters in. And (Love, Lust, and Erin) isn't even available on Literotica. And the 6 other or so stories that are forced on us too understand what was once a simple and straightforward story series. Then you make a dramatic, and major change in status for everything in the Korrupting Kayla series right away without any forewarning, and that gives the audience no payoff. You are way better than this. You can go epic with a story, but you can't make such a jump chapter to chapter. You need to make introductions to each of the side characters in the main story