by Hamlin
Got my copy. I honestly didn't expect to see Kayla end up where she did. It's getting wild. :D
Too short. Very little development of any plot. Why write this chapter and not wait until you have more content? I loved the first four chapters. They were awesome!
@dpabs The full finished novel is currently available. Future chapters are on a release schedule here over the course of the year.
Pretty damn good. I do hope that, at the conclusion, when you think it is time to call a halt, please try to make sure, you give the story a truly, momentous and happy ending for all concerned? For some reason, story writers today, seem to want to produce a unhappy and unsettling ending, and for me, it spoils the whole story!