All Comments on 'Kristin's Adventures Ch. 02'

It is best to stay with present or past tense when telling the story. Tense-jumping takes the reader out of the story and lends to confusion.

Enjoyed this! Total debauchery! Interested to see what's next! :)

HusbandX is right. Better stick with past tense, though. Few people can pull off an engaging story in present tense (it's just too distracting) -- and fewer still have a good reason to. Gave you 5 on chapter 1 but a 4 on this one just for that reason.