by spiderbyte94
Amazing.. Simply amazing..
Loved the build up and the progression..
I really hope you continue the series
My favourite chapter so far. Really enjoying the slow burn progression. It's going at just the right pace. You're also choosing the order of your pov characters very well. Alienating between seeing the acts followed by seeing the aftermath through Daniel's eyes and seeing things the opposite way round is a great way to keep things fresh!