All Comments on 'Kylie and the Roommate Ch. 03'

by spiderbyte94

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poly_cuckoldpoly_cuckoldover 2 years ago

So excited for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Amazing.. Simply amazing..

Loved the build up and the progression..

I really hope you continue the series

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved this. We need more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

WOW, this story is so great! I am looking forward to the next part.

LibertyMarshmellow98LibertyMarshmellow98almost 2 years ago

My favourite chapter so far. Really enjoying the slow burn progression. It's going at just the right pace. You're also choosing the order of your pov characters very well. Alienating between seeing the acts followed by seeing the aftermath through Daniel's eyes and seeing things the opposite way round is a great way to keep things fresh!

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